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Finally my time is done...
No longer have to live.
Can't find the will to continue.
Not after what's happened to you,
What you've become.
You're darker than the deepest space,
Lost in world of killing,
Dominating,
Losing yourself...
But for all the evil,
You're still a good man...
There is good left within you.
You're still the man I love.
But you are not strong enough...
And neither am I.
Can't hold on while you're alive,
Ready...to kill...to
Destroy lives...no
...No,
I'll wait for you.
I'm giving my life for you.
Anakin...there is still good in...
No longer have to live.
Can't find the will to continue.
Not after what's happened to you,
What you've become.
You're darker than the deepest space,
Lost in world of killing,
Dominating,
Losing yourself...
But for all the evil,
You're still a good man...
There is good left within you.
You're still the man I love.
But you are not strong enough...
And neither am I.
Can't hold on while you're alive,
Ready...to kill...to
Destroy lives...no
...No,
I'll wait for you.
I'm giving my life for you.
Anakin...there is still good in...
This is another poem about Padmé's death. I've written it from her POV and tried to make it so that she's actually dying in the poem.
© 2011 - 2024 RoverGirl
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Ah, sad! But great! And I love this line "You're darker than the deepest space", that's really good!