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The saga starts out like this,
Sweet kid who looks barely six.
He's a slave like his mom.
Then his life went off like a bomb.

He's sold to Watto then,
Working hard time and again.
He built Threepio,
His talents started to show.

A ship from Naboo,
Landed with a queen in its crew.
With Jedi and guards,
The hyperdrive blasted to shards.

Ani and Padmé meet,
Ani talks really sweet.
She goes on her way,
But that's not the last say.

Ani races his pod,
Others end with a plod.
He wins the race and he's glad.
Watto's bets were real bad

Ani says goodbye to his mom,
A Jedi he will become.
The parts have been gained,
But a Sith shows some disdain

To the capital they go,
Where the queen tries to show,
Her planet in need,
But she don't succeed.

Anakin and Qui-Gon,
With Padawan Obi-Wan.
Face the council who say,
No training for Ani no way.

Off to Naboo,
Say to Qui-Gon adieu.
He dies while Obi survives
Will train Ani who cries.

Now a padawan,
Something Yoda agrees on.
A smile from the queen,
That brings an end to this scene.
Before anyone comments about the odd use of tenses and sentence structure, word choice and missing parts out from the saga: THAT WAS ALL DELIBERATE!!

This poem was an absolute nightmare to get right but I am quite proud of it. I think it's one of my best.
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RainGirl2009 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
I think its awesome!
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RoverGirl Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanx! :)
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RainGirl2009 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
lol your welcome
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Van-Dunkelschreiber Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I like its style, diforent from you other stuff but still good in its own way
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RoverGirl Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanx :)
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Van-Dunkelschreiber Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
your welcome
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